I'm so excited! Although I didn't win 1st, 2nd or 3rd place in the
21st Annual Writer’s Digest Annual Self-Published Book Awards,the judges critique I copied from my email and posted below, just makes me want to sing!
10/17/2013. 2:47 PM
As promised, your judges commentary..21st Annual Writer’s Digest Annual Self-Published Book Awards,
Entry Title: Twee'
Author: Susie E. Caron
Judge Number: 7
Entry Category: Children's Picture books
Books are evaluated on a scale of 1 to 5, with 1 meaning “needs improvement” and 5 meaning “outstanding”. This scale is strictly to provide a point of reference, it is not a cumulative score and does not reflect ranking.
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Structure and Organization: 5
Production Quality and Cover Design: 5
Plot (if applicable): 4
Character Development (if applicable): 5
I like the allegorical nature of this story, and I really love the message. I could see this being a great story to introduce a discussion with children about perceptions and expectations. On the level of the allegory, if the rock represents parental protection and guidance (as the back cover suggests), I wonder why the rock isnâ€™t present from the very beginning of Twee''s life? Iâ€™d like to see Tweeâ€™ moving from a simple acceptance that the rock is there to a dissatisfaction with the limitations it places on her desire to see the world, and then finally to move beyond that dissatisfaction to a new appreciation of the rockâ€™s role in her life. The illustrations are a lovely accompaniment to the text -- they are simple and gentle to look at, and the proportion of text and illustration is well-balanced on the page. There were some grammatical mistakes in the text (particularly comma errors and some dialogue formatting mistakes). I was also confused by the apostrophe in Tweeâ€™â€™s name -- why is it there? If she named herself Tweeâ€™, would she name herself with an apostrophe? Does it change the pronunciation somehow? I thought the diction and sentence structures were generally appropriate for this audience level. While the bookâ€™s deeper message lends it to reading aloud, it is easily accessible for young independent readers as well.
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Susie E. Caron MA,
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Just wanted to say that I love your posts about the different ways to connect/relate/understand your child. It has given me a new approach towards understanding my daughter and allowing HER to tell me how she feels instead of me suggesting to her how she should feel. Thanks Susie!